نظرخواهي در مورد متن توصيه نامه

[atefeh_J]

در سوالتون بهتر بود مشخص می کردید نوع توصیه نامه که می گیرید. بعضی موارد استاد بصورت ان لاین فرم پر می کند که بعد از سابمیت کردن دیگر قابل تغییر نیست. اما اگر بصورت دستی پر کرده و قرار برای دانشگاه در پاکت بگذارید و بفرستید. در این مورد بستگی به استادتون داره که چقدر با شما همکاری بکند. بعضی استادها وقت زیادی دارند و هر تعداد هم توصیه نامه بخواهید به شما می دهند و اگر شما هم در این مورد حساس هستید؛ اینجا می تونید بدهید به استاد درست کنه. ولی اگر استادی هست خیلی به سختی فرم ها پر می کنه این مسائل خیلی عادی تو این فرایند. حتی خود استادهای امریکایی هم خیلی مواقع در پرکردن این فرم ها دچار اشتباه می شوند. من یادم تو همینجا یک بحثی در مورد In what capacity have you known the applicant بعد معلوم شد تعداد زیادی این سوال اشتباه جواب می دادند.[img]images/smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]

 

متاسفانه ایشان راهشان به من دوره همین را هم با پست برام فرستادند! وقت زیادی هم دیگه ندارم.
راستش اصلا نمی تونم به خودم قبول کنم که اشتباه سهوی بوده که به جای title  and occupation بیان اسم رشته شان را بنویسن!!!!

[Leopold]

کل پروسه اپلای شامل مقاله، امتحانات زبان، ایمیل، مصاحبه یه طرف این ریکامندیشن هم یه طرف
نیازی به مهر نیست. همون امضا کافی هست. 

 

واقعا فکر نمی کردم این بخش از پذیرش انقدر برایم اذیت کننده باشه متاسفانه مهر ایشان روی برگه ها هست و نمی تونم این کار را انجام بدم ولی اگه میشد حتما دریغ نمی کردم.

 

 

[ACU]

در سوالتون بهتر بود مشخص می کردید نوع توصیه نامه که می گیرید. بعضی موارد استاد بصورت ان لاین فرم پر می کند که بعد از سابمیت کردن دیگر قابل تغییر نیست. اما اگر بصورت دستی پر کرده و قرار برای دانشگاه در پاکت بگذارید و بفرستید. در این مورد بستگی به استادتون داره که چقدر با شما همکاری بکند. بعضی استادها وقت زیادی دارند و هر تعداد هم توصیه نامه بخواهید به شما می دهند و اگر شما هم در این مورد حساس هستید؛ اینجا می تونید بدهید به استاد درست کنه. ولی اگر استادی هست خیلی به سختی فرم ها پر می کنه این مسائل خیلی عادی تو این فرایند. حتی خود استادهای امریکایی هم خیلی مواقع در پرکردن این فرم ها دچار اشتباه می شوند. من یادم تو همینجا یک بحثی در مورد In what capacity have you known the applicant بعد معلوم شد تعداد زیادی این سوال اشتباه جواب می دادند.[img]images/smilies/biggrin.gif[/img]

 

من خیلی گشتم ولی متاسفانه بحث مربوطه رو پیدا نکردم. دقیقا سوال من هم هست همین قسمت. میشه راهنمایی کنید بگید توی کدوم تاپیک بود توضیح در مورد این قضیه؟

[فرید]

من خیلی گشتم ولی متاسفانه بحث مربوطه رو پیدا نکردم. دقیقا سوال من هم هست همین قسمت. میشه راهنمایی کنید بگید توی کدوم تاپیک بود توضیح در مورد این قضیه؟

 

اینجا پاسخ داده شده است. 

[MBA_DBA]

سلام دوستان
من این توصیه نامه رو تنظیم کردم میشه بهش نگاه بندازید و بهم بگید ایراد دستوری داره یا نه؟ و اینکه این متن خوبه یا نه؟
ممنون از راهنماییتونhttp://s3.picofile.com/file/8221252768/O...r.pdf.html

[akbar_saeedi]

سلام دوستان ی نگاه...

To Whom It May Concern

This letter of recommendation is to certify that the prospect student, Mr. A..B is highly eligible to pursue his education as a PhD student. I have known him for 6 years as his teacher for different courses in undergraduate studies and his Master thesis supervisor. Observing his active participation and interaction in the classes and his great ability to express and organize himself clearly made a positive image of Akbar in my mind. 

 It is worth to mention that after his success in passing nationwide M.Sc program entrance exam and all his great personal and academic features, I agreed eagerly with his request to be his supervisor. During doing researches in my laboratory for his Thesis with title of evaluation of bread making properties of spray dried sourdough, I well noticed that he is an exceptional, incredible and practical student. He is creative in problem solving and removing the limitations. His great passion for working with new designed and built spray-drier which had some technical problems at first phase and working extra hours over the summer strongly impressed me. The conclusion of his hard efforts was publishing three valuable papers.

 Furthermore, his interest in his major and great eagerness for learning was praiseworthy and made me agree with him become my teaching research assistant in my laboratory during his thesis research for about six months. He properly used this opportunity and improved his theoretical knowledge and practical skills. During his time in my lab He was one of my best students and I believe that his overall intelligence, analytical skills, research abilities and his great teamwork make his an excellent candidate for your Food science & Technology program.

.If you have any questions regarding this recommendation, please do not hesitate to contact me.

[Matinking]

سلام دوستان ی نگاه...

To Whom It May Concern

This letter of recommendation is to certify that the prospect student, Mr. A..B is highly eligible to pursue his education as a PhD student. I have known him for 6 years as his teacher for different courses in undergraduate studies and his Master thesis supervisor. Observing his active participation and interaction in the classes and his great ability to express and organize himself clearly made a positive image of Akbar in my mind. 

 It is worth to mention that after his success in passing nationwide M.Sc program entrance exam and all his great personal and academic features, I agreed eagerly with his request to be his supervisor. During doing researches in my laboratory for his Thesis with title of evaluation of bread making properties of spray dried sourdough, I well noticed that he is an exceptional, incredible and practical student. He is creative in problem solving and removing the limitations. His great passion for working with new designed and built spray-drier which had some technical problems at first phase and working extra hours over the summer strongly impressed me. The conclusion of his hard efforts was publishing three valuable papers.

 Furthermore, his interest in his major and great eagerness for learning was praiseworthy and made me agree with him become my teaching research assistant in my laboratory during his thesis research for about six months. He properly used this opportunity and improved his theoretical knowledge and practical skills. During his time in my lab He was one of my best students and I believe that his overall intelligence, analytical skills, research abilities and his great teamwork make his an excellent candidate for your Food science & Technology program.

.If you have any questions regarding this recommendation, please do not hesitate to contact me.

سلام

در جایی نوشته اید که:
made me agree with him become my teaching research assistant

به نظر من این عبارت رو به این فروم تغییر بدید:
made me agree to choose him as the TA, corresponding to CCC course. Furthermore, his attendance at my lab as a RA did lead to many noticeable accomplishments.

براتون آرزوی موفقیت دارم

[akbar_saeedi]

سلام دوستان یه نگاه قشنگ..

Dear members of Admissions Committee
 
This letter is in support of Mr. A. B. applying for PhD studies in Food science department.
 I have known Akbar for two years as his thesis advisor. We were working beside each other in a research group at Dr Peighambardous' laboratory. He is an outstanding and active student who is a well-organized and highly-motivated student. While doing researches, he used to study diverse related papers and many times brought new viewpoints and perspectives for doing further fruitful experiments. He liked much engaging in the work of other members of group and helping them to expand his theoretical and practical knowledge in extra hours or on holidays.
 I found him very cooperative and patient since we faced difficulties and unpredictable happenings. He tried his best to work on the paper, named physicochemical and functional properties of spray-dried sourdough in bread making, published in journal of Food Science and Technology International. His persistence and willingness in writing of the other two published papers impressed me. Throughout this time, I believe Akbar a responsible and hardworking student and capable of facing new challenges. Also, his research ability, professional interest, maturity, motivation, self-reliance and academic preparation are exceptional. High degree enthusiasm towards working in an advanced laboratory always was visible in his eyes.
 According to my experience, he has all the requirements to make him a very successful student and with no hesitation I strongly recommend him for the program of food science & technology.
If you would like to discuss this further, please feel free to contact me

[Matinking]

سلام دوستان یه نگاه قشنگ..

Dear members of Admissions Committee
 
This letter is in support of Mr. A. B. applying for PhD studies in Food science department.
 I have known Akbar for two years as his thesis advisor. We were working beside each other in a research group at Dr Peighambardous' laboratory. He is an outstanding and active student who is a well-organized and highly-motivated student. While doing researches, he used to study diverse related papers and many times brought new viewpoints and perspectives for doing further fruitful experiments. He liked much engaging in the work of other members of group and helping them to expand his theoretical and practical knowledge in extra hours or on holidays.
 I found him very cooperative and patient since we faced difficulties and unpredictable happenings. He tried his best to work on the paper, named physicochemical and functional properties of spray-dried sourdough in bread making, published in journal of Food Science and Technology International. His persistence and willingness in writing of the other two published papers impressed me. Throughout this time, I believe Akbar a responsible and hardworking student and capable of facing new challenges. Also, his research ability, professional interest, maturity, motivation, self-reliance and academic preparation are exceptional. High degree enthusiasm towards working in an advanced laboratory always was visible in his eyes.
 According to my experience, he has all the requirements to make him a very successful student and with no hesitation I strongly recommend him for the program of food science & technology.
If you would like to discuss this further, please feel free to contact me

سلام

together به جای beside each other...

related diverse به جای diverse related...

was keen on involving in the other group members' projects به جای liked much engaging in the work of other members of group...

Akbar is a به جای Akbar a...

facing with new challenges به جای facing new challenges...

High degrees of enthusiasm به جای High degree enthusiasm...

to prove himself as a very successful به جای to make him a very successful...

براتون آرزوی موفقیت دارم

[akbar_saeedi]

سلام یه نگاه قشنگ دیگه...

To Whom It May Concern

It's with great pleasure that I am writing this letter as a recommendation letter to suggest Mr. A. B as a prospective student for your program. I have known him for six years as his teacher in different courses in undergraduate studies and also as his Master thesis advisor. Akbar was active in discussions, constantly asking probing questions and making thoughtful comments and these features enabled his get a perfect mark of x and y out of 20 orderly at courses of ,considering the course level , I believe this clearly shows his amazing performance and puts him at the top of my class. Although, his grade in some courses are not perfect but his performance can`t realistically be judged by his grade, because our department professors are so strict that the GPA of his classmates is only 11/20. He is intelligent, ambitious and self- motivated in doing his tasks.

Furthermore, his excellence in cooperation and group working both in general and technical aspects greatly motivated me as a teacher. I can remember when I was teaching for Master students  at course of XX  to use HPLC, GC and Mass spectrophotometer, the eagerness of Akbar to master skills and his request to do experiments at nights was wonderful for me as a teacher and strongly impressed me. His meticulous questions beside his friendly personality are some of those pleasing times I have in mind, now. He was the first student who presented his lucrative thesis on time which trustworthy to me as his advisor.

 Akbar has been a top student during his study and research in our department and I strongly recommend him as an outstanding candidate for your program.

I'd be happy if I could provide any further information in case of support Mr. Bahrami' application to your school. Please, do not hesitate to contact me.