07-02-2011, 10:21 PM
(07-02-2011, 02:11 PM)ice نوشته: سلام، من چند سوال در این زمینه داشتم:
پاراگراف اول همیشه در جلب توجه خطرناک بوده، این قسمت را چگونه شروع کنم تا خواننده هنوز نخوانده ردش نکند؟
آیا موقع نوشتن sop می توانیم از جملات/ ضرب المثل ها/ اصطلاحات معروف استفاده کنیم (با ذکر منبح جمله) تا منظور را بهتر برسانیم؟
در بعضی نمونه ها، فرد این بخش را به صورت تاریخ زندگی خود بیان می نماید: "در دبستان به این دلایل به این رشته علاقه مند شدم ... در لیسانس گرایشم را تعیین کردم ..." این کار برای sop در مقطح دکترا چقدر صحیح است؟
با سپاس
1st Paragraph: While writing about your aim in life, you should also show your excellence in academics. The first paragraph is going to create the 'first impression', so it should be carefully crafted to show your interest in the chosen field from the very beginning. You can explain why have you chosen this field after 12th, how have you pursued it with great vigor till your bachelors, showing consistency towards the field. You may write briefly about subjects covered (tactfully link them with your specialization of masters) during bachelors.
2nd Paragraph: You can write about your career goal, future plans, what you want to be, your confidence and skills to pursue postgraduate/doctoral studies in that field. You can explain everything, relating it to your chosen field.
3rd Paragraph: Here you can write about your projects done, your internship, your paper presentation seminars/symposiums attended, about the awards got, publications, reading related journals, etc. Do not just write point-wise. You should skillfully interlink everything, stressing on your field of interest. The essay should not sound personal too.
4th Paragraph: Here you can describe your extra curricular activities, like sports, drama, music, etc., your technical and managerial skills, your ability to work as a team member, result oriented efforts, etc. Everywhere you are supposed to convince the admission committee members how all these activities have inspired you, influenced you to choose this particular field and how these achievements are going to help you achieve your goals.
5th Paragraph: In this paragraph you can write about your social activities if any. For instance, organizing a blood donation camp, organizing an event in your college, which might reflect your social behavior. This helps to convey that you are a responsible citizen, aware of civic duties, you respect different cultures and traditions, etc.
6th Paragraph: Using modest language and exhibiting your internet skills, you can explain what you searched for, when you decided to apply for post graduation. You are expected to write about why have you chosen the particular university for your post graduation plan. Remember, they know that they have good faculty, good infrastructure, etc. You have to write about the research work done over there, for which you may have to go through the brochure or site information thoroughly. You can say that other related branches in the university will also help you to achieve your goals. Write about how you visualize yourself in the next 10 years.
7th Paragraph: This will be the concluding paragraph where you can again lay stress on your determination, ability to work independently, etc. You can end it with a sentence like I look forward to be a strong addition to your department...I hope you do consider me for the masters program....
