رفع اشکال و تقویت Writing زبان انگلیسی

[amin_b]

باز هم من با ایمیل هام، دوستان ممنون میشم اگر ایرادی در متن زیر هست مطرح کنید.

,Dear Professor

.Unfortunately we unable to register ODBL.COM because someone had registered it since 2000
If you let me I will speak to Dr. riahi presidency of IT center of AUT after the holidays, I hope to convince him to give the host and domain to us, otherwise we can start with another domain name like what raised in last email
.About our thesis I'm preparing the first progress report, inshallah I will send it to you soon


,Warmly
AB

[amirhossein.gh]

,Dear Professor

.Unfortunately we are unable to register ODBL.COM because someone has registered for it since 2000
If you let me, I will speak to Dr. Riahi president of IT center in AUT after holidays; hope to convince him to give a host and domain to us, otherwise we can start with another domain named like what raised in last email
.About our thesis I'm preparing the first progress report, think I will send it to you soon


Truly,

[m0h3n]

باز هم من با ایمیل هام، دوستان ممنون میشم اگر ایرادی در متن زیر هست مطرح کنید.

,Dear Professor

.Unfortunately we unable to register ODBL.COM because someone had registered it since 2000
If you let me I will speak to Dr. riahi presidency of IT center of AUT after the holidays, I hope to convince him to give the host and domain to us, otherwise we can start with another domain name like what raised in last email
.About our thesis I'm preparing the first progress report, inshallah I will send it to you soon


,Warmly
AB

,Dear Professor

.Unfortunately we are unable to register ODBL.COM because it is already taken
If you let me I will talk to Dr. riahi, the president of IT center of AUT after holidays, I hope to convince him to give the host and domain to us, otherwise we can start with another domain name like what raised in last email

( !!!! raised)

.About our thesis, I'm currently preparing the first report and I will send it to you soon


,Warmly
AB

[hirt]

دوستان من این رایتینگ رو نوشتم. ممنون میشم یه review اش بکنید...

[ice]

دوستان من این رایتینگ رو نوشتم. ممنون میشم یه review اش بکنید...

چند جا که به نظرم آمد رو اصلاح کردم. در دیکته دقت بیشتری کنید گاهی معنی کلمه با یه حرف عوض می شه. تا تسلط کامل هم سعی کنید کمتر از واژگان گنده استفاده کنید. با ساده ولی قشنگ نوشتن هم می توان نمرات خوب گرفت.
این نظرات شخصی من هست.

[lavender]

الان من تو یه موضوعی موندم واقعاً. می خوام بگم:
خانوم X می تونن به وکالت از من مدارکم رو از شما دریافت کنن.
این جمله درسته؟
she is able to receive documents on behalf of me.

[ice]

الان من تو یه موضوعی موندم واقعاً. می خوام بگم:
خانوم X می تونن به وکالت از من مدارکم رو از شما دریافت کنن.
این جمله درسته؟
she is able to receive documents on behalf of me.

 

Ms X has permission to/can receive the documents on my behalf.
Ms X is my representative and can receive the documents on my behalf.

 

[amin_b]

دوستان گرامی
سلام
ما قصد داریم یک ایمیل به یکی از اساتید در رابطه با همکاری در زمینه تحقیقاتی مشترک ارسال کنیم. ممنون میشم نظرات خودتون رو در رابطه با متن ایمیل که در زیر آورده شده مطرح کنید.
پیشاپیش متشکرم  

Dear P. I.,

J. N. and I are two master students in Biomechanics, and are interested in your field of research. Currently we are working on the mechanobiological aspects of Orthopedic Biomechanics and bone tissue engineering and because of your own background in these fields of research we would be honored to have your support for our research in the framework of mutual collaboration.  We sent a an email through our supervisor professor R. but we didn't receive any email in reply. We thought perhaps you didn't receive our email. Therefore we are sending this email again.

Subsequent to your positive response we will propound our concerns and questions in the our investigations.

We very much look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,
A. B.

[ice]

دوستان گرامی
سلام
ما قصد داریم یک ایمیل به یکی از اساتید در رابطه با همکاری در زمینه تحقیقاتی مشترک ارسال کنیم. ممنون میشم نظرات خودتون رو در رابطه با متن ایمیل که در زیر آورده شده مطرح کنید.
پیشاپیش متشکرم  

Dear P. I.,

J. N. and I are two master students in Biomechanics, and are interested in your field of research. Currently we are working on the mechanobiological aspects of Orthopedic Biomechanics and bone tissue engineering and because of your own background in these fields of research we would be honored to have your support for our research in the framework of mutual collaboration.  We sent a an email through our supervisor professor R. but we didn't receive any email in reply. We thought perhaps you didn't receive our email. Therefore we are sending this email again.

Subsequent to your positive response we will propound our concerns and questions in the our investigations.

We very much look forward to hearing from you.

Best regards,
A. B.

 

اگر قبلا پاسخ ندادند در عنوان ایمیل دقت کنید. یکسری تغییر دادم که نظر شخصی من هستند.

J. N. and I are two master students in Biomechanics, who are interested in your field of research.
Currently we are working on the mechanobiological aspects of Orthopedic Biomechanics and bone tissue engineering. Due to your background in these fields of research we would be honored/hope to be able to have your support for our research in the framework of mutual collaboration. 
We sent an email through our supervisor professor R. but having not received a reply, we thought perhaps you didn't receive our email. Therefore, we are sending this second email.
Subsequent to your positive response we will propound our concerns and questions regarding our investigations.
We very much look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards

 

[amin_b]

اگر قبلا پاسخ ندادند در عنوان ایمیل دقت کنید. یکسری تغییر دادم که نظر شخصی من هستند.

J. N. and I are two master students in Biomechanics, who are interested in your field of research.
Currently we are working on the mechanobiological aspects of Orthopedic Biomechanics and bone tissue engineering. Due to your background in these fields of research we would be honored/hope to be able to have your support for our research in the framework of mutual collaboration. 
We sent an email through our supervisor professor R. but having not received a reply, we thought perhaps you didn't receive our email. Therefore, we are sending this second email.
Subsequent to your positive response we will propound our concerns and questions regarding our investigations.
We very much look forward to hearing from you.
Best regards

 

 

ممنون بابت توجه شما.
به نظرتون این پیام رو با چه عنوانی ارسال کنیم؟