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Dear Professor XXX,

 

Hello,

 

I am pleased to inform you that I have just applied online to XXX. Please pardon the lateness of my applying which was mainly due to my passport expiration while I had to upload my passport picture in applying process. Please let me know if you would like any additional information in order to evaluate my application. I really hope I get the chance to work under your supervision.

Best Regards,

Mohammad

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