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[Saeid]

To whom it may concern
i am wrting this letter as a recommendation letter to suggest MRr. XXX as a prospective student for your program

I know X for two years as his teacher

X asked me to write a recommendation letter for him, because we had a course together: the lab of computer architecture. He got a perfect mark in it: a full 20/20! I think this shows his perfect performance clearly. Beyond his excellent score, he has some other outstanding qualities that qualify him for your program. He was so organized during this practical course – that is so important about these types of courses. These sorts of courses are based on detecting, analyzing and then solving the issues and he did it well as an innovative and open mind student. Another aspect of his personality is his interest in teamwork. The course was generally related to teamwork activities and he could afford it very well to get along with his group members very well to solve the problems perfectly. We had a time pressure in each class session to complete a whole part of the course and he did it suitably too. Finally his great mark distinguish him in the class.

Based on my knowledge about him and his personality, i strongly recommend him to your program as he has sufficient potential to do as a meritorious student at the MSc programs.
Please don’t hesitate to contact me later, if you need more information about him

Sincerely

moshakhasat va emaile ostad

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