نظرخواهي در مورد متن توصيه نامه

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این تغییرات به نظر من به متنتون کمک می کنند (ولی هنوز جای کار داره):

It is with great pleasure that I am writing this recommendation letter for X. I have known X for two years. He took a course under my supervision: the lab of computer architecture. He was able to achieve got a perfect mark of 20/20! Which, considering the courses level, I believe this clearly shows his perfect performance, and puts him at the top of my class.

Beyond his excellent marks, he has some other outstanding qualities that I rather would like to mention. He was so very organized during the practical course – which is so extremely important about these types of courses in such courses. My classes are based on detecting, analyzing and then solving the issues at hand. X showed he was capable and did well as an
innovative student .Another positive aspect of his personality was his interest in teamwork. The course was generally related to depended on teamwork activities and he could afford it very was able to get well along with his group members in solving the problems perfectly. We had a time pressure in each class session to complete a whole part of the course and he did well in it too. Based on my experience of working with him and my knowledge about him and of his personality, he has sufficient potential to do work as a meritorious student at the MSc programs. If you need more information about him, please don’t hesitate to contact me.