نظرخواهی در مورد متن ایمیل به استادان

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دوستان عزیز ممنون میشم اگر نظرتونو در مورد متن ایمیل اولیه من به اساتید بدید و اگر جایی بنظرتون نقطه ضعف مثل معدل یا هست رو بگین حذف کنم ؟ پیشاپیش ممنونم 

Dear Professor….,

 

I am XXXXXXXXXX, M.Sc. graduated in organic chemistry from XXXXXXXXXXXX, Iran, which is one of the best universities in Iran. I am really interested in XXXXX .I have had the privilege of following your research closely in the last few months. I have read many papers published by your group and am fascinated by the questions you seek to answer by XXXXXX. Particularly, I’m deeply fascinated by the “XXXXXXXXXXXXXXXXX” project that is developed in your group.

My master’s GPA in organic chemistry is 17.15/20 and my bachelor’s GPA, is 16.61/20. My iBT TOEFL Score is 104 (Reading: 29, Listening: 24, Speaking: 22, and Writing: 29), and my score in GRE Subject test (in chemistry), is 830 which is 86% below. My GRE General Revised version Scores are as follows: verbal: 155, quantitative: 162.

 

For my master thesis, I have worked on the application of ....... in......, which was published in  ..... journal. Besides, I have been TA for several semesters in XXX university. There are some projects as well which I have done during my career as a master student. These are further detailed in my CV.

 

Working in group and under your supervision would allow me to pursue my scientific passion: better understanding of XXXXXX. With my diverse skill set, I’m confident I can significantly contribute to the projects in your group and would be privileged to discuss this further with you. My CV is attached for your review and I appreciate your consideration.

 

Sincerely,
XXXXXXXXXX
M.Sc. in Organic Chemistry
XXXXXXUniversity of Technology
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