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Most of the times discussing opposing points of view is essential. Because In such this cases, we can consider every angle of the problem and this evaluation could lead to removing the possible bars and replacing them with better ideas. This can be a good guarantee for progression, but the effects of coming up with contrary views depend on the type of subject. Moreover, there are some people who intentionally come up with some opposite ideas for to creating schism among the members of an organization or team. In such cases not only are contrasting viewpoints not useful, but they can also lead to failure.

Stating different viewpoints and taking into account all variable ideas can help progress a lot. For example when the members of a business organization notice all possible points of view, they can determine all negative and positive facets of their programs. In contrast if the members are not free to tell their different ideas, the executive board would not
consider all possible flaws of their plans and it can lead to decreasing the efficacy and regression.

There is an important point to notice keep in mind/remember and it is that the effect of coming up with opposite viewpoints can depend on the setting and situation. For example in About a military operation,Because/as unanimous agreement with orders and conformity are so important
in military operations, it is necessary that just commanders decide. If the entire unit’s members want to give their ideas, it may lead to disturbance and disruption.

Sometimes stating contrasting points of view do not lead to progress and success. Because they create schism among the members. There may be some people who intentionally come up with some opposite opinions to just for making other members suspicious and weakening the solidarity among them. In this case considering such ideas can lead to failure especially in some critical situations in which alliance between members is necessary.

In conclusion, considering the contrasting viewpoints can lead to progress. Because it can make help build a bigger larger and more meticulous picture of reality and reveal all facets and flaws of work. But the effectiveness of contrasting opinions can depend on the type of situation and also the intention of the person stating the opposing idea.

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