نظرخواهی در مورد متن ایمیل به استادان

[MaMi]

دوستان ممنون میشوم نظرشون رو در مورد این ایمیل بفرمایند (در پاسخ به ایمیل استاد دوم که برای من ارسال کرده بود)؛

I’m going to apply for “Fall 2013” and you will find my TOEFL score in the attached file. I haven't taken GRE exam yet (I will take it on 20th this October). As the scoring system in Iranian’s universities is on 20 scale so I wrote my GPA in 20 scale, too

I’m interested in doing research on “Light Timber Frame Constructions” with emphasis on their “Dynamic Evaluation and Properties”. Because I’m preparing myself for GRE exam and work as a part time employer too, I need little time, a week or maybe two, to specify some potential research topics

Thanks for your consideration