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[Babak]

به نظر من خوبه. چند تا اشکال کوچیک دیدم که اصلاح کردم:

I’m going to apply for “Fall 2013” and my TOEFL score is attached. I haven't taken GRE yet, but I will take it on October 20th and will send you the score as soon as I receive it. As the scoring system in Iranian universities is on 20 scale, I wrote my GPA in 20 scale.
I’m interested in doing research on “Light Timber Frame Constructions” with emphasis on their “Dynamic Evaluation and Properties”. Since I’m preparing myself

for the GRE exam and work part time as well, I need a little time, a week or maybe two, to specify a few potential research topics
Thanks for your consideration