نظرخواهی در مورد متن ایمیل به استادان

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Dear Professor .....


I am My name is .....


I have completed my master program M.Sc. in biotechnology from ........ university – Iran. My GPA is 16.0 out of 20. I am ranked in the 5 top students in our class(if it is real!!). I have

seen your research area and I am interested to start a PhD program under your

supervision.



I am a skilled biotechnologist with outstanding sufficient background in successful tissue

culture and bioreactor engineering. My research interests are:Natural products
cancer research and scale up and scale down of bio processes. I have written a book (not published yet),
published papers and I have a patent on Bioreactor design for improvement hairy
root induction to secondary metabolites production .You can find more details on my cv CV which
has been attached to this email (needs more explanation of your research interest- name of papers, where published, when published, your current and future research work)


please indicate what your IELTS, GRE/GMAT, ... scores are.


I believe that my excellent academic record and service work makes me a good I believe that I could be a good candidate in your research group if I may be admitted. I have a high passion for doing research and I think I have shown my abilities during years of M.Sc. studies .

candidate for this position



Please feel free to contact me with any questions or if any additional information is


needed. I am eagerly waiting to hear more from you. I'd be very honored if I could gain a chance to study under your supervision.



Best regards Sincerely Yours,
Your Name

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