نظرخواهی در مورد متن ایمیل به استادان

[lidoma]

این متن جدیدی که با توجه به اصلاحیات شما و امیر حسین آماده کردم اگر باز هم ایرادی داره لطف کنیداصلاح کنید ممنونم
I have completed my M.Sc. in biotechnology from Hammedan university – Iran. My GPA is 17.2 out of 20.I
am a skilled biotechnologist with sufficient background in successful tissue culture
and bioreactor engineering. My research interests are: Natural products cancer research and
scale up and scale down of bio processes. I have written a book (not published
yet). I have submitted my paper to international peer-reviewed Phytochemistry
journal.I have a patent on Bioreactor
design for improvement hairy root induction to secondary metabolites production
.You can find more details on my CV which has been attached to this email .

I believe that I can be a good candidate
in your research group if I may be admitted. I have a high passion for doing
research and I think I have shown my abilities during years of M.Sc. studies .


I am eagerly waiting to hear more from
you. I'd be very honored if I could gain a chance to study under your
supervision.


Sincerely Yours,