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Dear Professor XX,

I am a holder of Master’s degree in XXX., XXX Eng., from XXXX Univ. of Tech. and Bachelor’s degree in XXX from the same university.
Since I am going to apply for a PhD degree in XXX program at university of XXX, I am going to get sure about my prospective advisor pertaining to my field of study. Fortunately, I have considered your research areas the nearest to those of my interests, so I would be very grateful if you could assess my abilities and background through the resume which I have attached to this e-mail and see if you could accept me as a PhD student.

 

 

I would be pleased if you could consider my case. Should you need any additional information, I will provide all in detail.
Thank you for your time and consideration. I am looking forward to hearing from you at your earliest convenience

 

 

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