نظرخواهی در مورد متن ایمیل به استادان

[Emir]

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دوستان نظرتون در مورد متن ایمیل من چی هستش ؟
Dear Professor,

I am graduate in Financial Management (M.A). I want to continue my studying in Ph.D course .

I am a active student in research and am interested in financial researches.

I have practiced many articles with subjects : 1. Banking 2.  Stock Market and Stock Returns  3.Investment and Decision Making  4.Corporate Governance and at last Neural Networks.

Also I have taught some courses at university.

Dear professor I want to be your student and perform my researches Under your guidance and I have prepared myself to do all tasks such as: researches and etc... 

that I have to perform them.

May you please accept me as your student in the future . I promise you that I will be one of your best student.

I ask you please give me a chance to show my abilities to you.