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متنهای زیر رانوشتم اگه اشکالی دارن بی زحمت واسم سابمیت کنین .

I am interested in financial researches in Investment and Decision Making, Banking,Stock Market and Stock Returns, Corporate Governance and at last Neural Networks and also I have practiced papers in mentioned subjects
I was invited professor in some Universities and I have taught some courses about Finance
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نظر من:اگه منظورتون مقاله هستش از paper که practice هم میشه نوشت که اوردین(به معنی پرداختن به کاری هست)...اگه چاپ کردین خوب بگین published یا اگه در دست کار هست بگینunder preparation
حتما تو رزومه نام مقاله ها رو بیار(چه چاپ شده چه در حال چاپ)

I am interested in financial researches in Investment and Decision Making, Banking,Stock Market and Stock Returns, Corporate Governance, and Neural Networks. It is worth to note that I have practiced papers in mentioned subjects.

دومی

I was invited by some professors in various Universities and I have taught some courses about Finance.

و یا به طور اختصار:

I have had a lot of experiences in teaching different courses in Finance.

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