02-04-2015, 09:28 PM
(02-04-2015, 09:07 PM)'sarane' نوشته:دوستان در مورد متن زیر میشه نظرتون رو بگین؟؟
After graduation from university in 11.2002, I decided to prepare myself for the entrance exam of Ms. (Iran’s universities hold entrance exam for Bs. and Ms.) which is usually held in February or March. During that time, I also searched for a decent job which was related to my major. I prepared a CV and I sent my CV to different companies and firms. Sometimes, I was invited to job interviews, but I did not like either the job fields or the roles. In 01.2003, I started teaching English and Physics at home to children in elementary and high school levels. So that, I not only could save money but also I could keep in touch with different people and develop a good communication skills in the society. Fortunately, after my first Ms. entrance exam in 04.2003 I was accepted in a job interview that I liked the job field and position (XXXXXXcompany). They told me that I could start the job during a month. Thus, I was employed in XXXXX Co. in 05.2003.
به نطر من طولانیه. همون دو خط اول کافیه. برای آزمون آماده میشدم و دنبال کار میگشتم. تدریس رو هم اشاره کنید. ولی لازم نیست توضیحات اضافه بدید که برای communication siklls بوده. برا پول بوده دیگه خواهر من. سعی کنید Natural and Brutally honest باشه و در عین حال Simple.
در ضمن دقت کنید که همه اطلاعاتی که خواستند رو داده باشید که به نظر تو اون دو خط اول داده شده.
این نظر منه.
در ضمن دقت کنید که همه اطلاعاتی که خواستند رو داده باشید که به نظر تو اون دو خط اول داده شده.
این نظر منه.
