سوالات پیرامون ارسال ریزنمرات و مدارک تحصیلی

[Babak]

به نظر من متن رو به شکل زیر تغییر بدید. توضیحات آخر نامه ضروری نیست و نوشتن نام پدر و غیره که در ایران مرسومه در امریکا مرسوم نیست.

To: The Admission Committee of University of California

Dear Sirs,

This is to confirm that Mr. XXXX _ D.B: XXXX is a full-time Bachelor of Science
student in the department of Electrical Engineering at the Power and Water University
of Technology.
He has passed XXX out of a total required 141 credits with a GPA of XXX out of 20.0.

He is in the final year of the program and is expected to graduate by July 2012.