نظرخواهي در مورد متن توصيه نامه

[ho1373]

این توصیه نامه چطوره؟

To Whom It May Concern:

This letter is my personal recommendation for xxxx. As the teacher in .... high school, I have known her for approximately Six years. She has been a tremendous student and an asset to our school. I found her to be consistently pleasant, tackling all assignments with dedication and determination .she has been interested in obtaining an deploma for some time now. During her time here, she has consistently demonstrated a strong work ethic and a dedication to success. Her efforts have produced high 
quality results time and time again.

I feel that she would be an excellent candidate for your esteemed program. And I feel confident that she will continue to succeed in her studies, because I believe she exhibits many of the qualities that are essential to Bachlor program, An education at your esteemed your university will help her hone these qualities, while enhancing her career opportunities. For these reasons I highly recommend XXXXXXX for your program.


If you have any questions regarding her or this recommendation, please contact me.
Sincerely,

xxxxcccc
head of ...school

[ho1373]

یا اینا چطورن؟To whom it may ConcernX has been an assistant in my laboratory during the past year, and has proven to be exceptional in several respects. First, X is exceptionally intelligent. He proved to be a very quick study, learning the elements of experimental design and the uses of microcomputers in record time. Furthermore, his questions are always thoughtful and penetrating. X threw himself into his assigned projects wholeheartedly, and shows every sign of having real talent in . . . . I was a little surprised by his high degree of enthusiasm because I knew that X was not primarily interested in . . . . When I mentioned this to him, I discovered that he has well defined career goals that mesh with the projects he was working on . . . .Second, X is exceptionally diligent and hard working. He worked many extra hours over the summer. I vividly recall coming into the lab late in the evening. . . and finding X at work. X invariably finished projects well in advance of our projected target date. X was always cheerful during this intense period, and was a joy to have in the lab.Third, X is very good at working with other people. He is exceptionally nice and considerate and sensitive. X is not only good humored and friendly, but also is good at gauging other people's level of knowledge and attitudes. . . .All in all, I think X has a very bright future, and I am sure that he would benefit from . . . . Given his great intelligence and sensitivity, I am sure that he could put . . . to good use.In short, I give X my highest recommendation, and very much hope that the committee judges his application favorably." Sincerely,اینا نقاط ضعفشون کجاستTo whom it may concern 
I would like to recommend Mr. xxx for your program. I know Mr. xxx because he studied  in my lab for one summer. Mr. xxx came to me a year ago to discuss the possibility of spending a summer working in my lab. I met with him and outlined a project. I gave him some background reading at our first meeting. By the time of our second meeting he had read what I had given him and prepared a two-page project description. This level of effort is typical of a good medical student who joins my lab, so I agreed to take him on for a summer.
During his time in my lab, Mr. xxx demonstrated a good work ethic and interpersonal skills. We outlined a scope of work to be completed, and he successfully completed that work in the time required. He put in extra hours as necessary in order to meet specific deadlines that I set. I teamed him up with another student to work on the project. He seemed to work well with the other student, and I found him very personable. Mr. xxx put in sufficient work to be a co-author on a manuscript. Overall, I would strongly recommend Mr. Naseri for a position in your program.
Sincerely,
 این چطورTo whom it may concern 
 
I am writing this letter to strongly recommend Mr. xxx for your program.
He is One of my graduate students. He took Fundamentals of English. He has been among top 10 percent of his colleagues. I found him an intelligent person and he has a deep understanding of the theoretical aspects of the subject and also has the ability to transfer them to practice. Therefore, I recommend him strongly for higher study. I can assure you that he will surely be able to pass your education. program successfully due to his willingness and abilities. Please don’t hesitate to contact me for more information about the applicant.
مرسی
​ببخشید زیاد شد
 

[GordAfarid]

سلام دوستان.اگر ممکنه در مورد متن این توصیه نامه نظرخودتونو بگین.فقط من کمی عجله دارم ممنون میشوم زودتر از نظراتتون آگاه بشم

To whom it may concern
I am pleased to write a letter of recommendation for xxxxxxxxxxxx
I have known xxxxx for the past 4 years as she has taken different courses of xxxxxxxx that I teach and she was top student of the class for all courses.   As her professor, I have had an opportunity to observe her participation and interaction in class and to evaluate xxxxx's knowledge of the subject matter.
 She is an outstanding student in all respects.xxxxx has proven that through hard work, follow through, and team work, she can accomplish tasks in a courteous and timely manner. Also she is interested in xxxxxxx of the patients with different clinical profiles and participating in basic as well as clinical researches.
I highly recommend xxxxxx for graduate courses.
                                                                                        

[Simon2007]

سلام دوستان.اگر ممکنه در مورد متن این توصیه نامه نظرخودتونو بگین.فقط من کمی عجله دارم ممنون میشوم زودتر از نظراتتون آگاه بشم

To whom it may concern
I am pleased to write a letter of recommendation for xxxxxxxxxxxx
I have known xxxxx for the past 4 years as she has taken different courses of xxxxxxxx that I teach and she was top student of the class for all courses.   As her professor, I have had an opportunity to observe her participation and interaction in class and to evaluate xxxxx's knowledge of the subject matter.
 She is an outstanding student in all respects.xxxxx has proven that through hard work, follow through, and team work, she can accomplish tasks in a courteous and timely manner. Also she is interested in xxxxxxx of the patients with different clinical profiles and participating in basic as well as clinical researches.
I highly recommend xxxxxx for graduate courses.
                                                                                        

 

به نظر من يك توصيه نامه ي معمولي هستش و جنرال. يعني شبيه اين زياد در اينترنت يافت ميشه. توصيه نامه ايي از نظر من خوبه كه استاد از شما چيزهايي رو بيان كنه يا تجربيات يا خاطراتي كه در جاي ديگه موجود نباشه و در ضمن نشون بده شما در شرايط خاص داراي چه قابليت هايي هستيد. 
مثلا براي توضيح حرفم به متن زير توجه كنيد: 
ايشون خيلي فعاله و پر انرژي . (حالا چرا؟ ) يادم مياد سال گذشته در دانشگاه كنفرانسي داشتيم كه اون شبانه روز در دانشگاه براي هماهنگي دوندگي ميكرد و با اينكه چند شب كم خوابي كشيده بود كار گروهي خوبي ارائه داد همه چيز به خوبي برگزا ر شد و من از اينكه مسئوليت اين قضيه رو بهش دادم جدا به خودم باليدم. 

ممكنه شما اين موضوع رو تو هر توصيه نامه ي جنرالي پيدا نكنيد. اين فقط يك نمونه مثال بود. به ياد بياريد با استادتون چه خاطرات مشتركي داشتيد كه نشانگر يكي از صفات خوب شما بوده و ايشون هم به ياد مياره. اون رو عنوان كنيد. شادزي
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[GordAfarid]

ضمن سپاس از SimonFrom-A.A، لطفا سایر دوستان هم اگر نظری دارند و نکات دیگه ای مد نظرشون هست بگن

 

[m0h3n]

سلام دوستان.اگر ممکنه در مورد متن این توصیه نامه نظرخودتونو بگین.فقط من کمی عجله دارم ممنون میشوم زودتر از نظراتتون آگاه بشم

To whom it may concern
I am pleased to write a letter of recommendation for xxxxxxxxxxxx
I have known xxxxx for the past 4 years as she has taken different courses of xxxxxxxx that I teach and she was top student of the class for all courses.   As her professor, I have had an opportunity to observe her participation and interaction in class and to evaluate xxxxx's knowledge of the subject matter.
 She is an outstanding student in all respects.xxxxx has proven that through hard work, follow through, and team work, she can accomplish tasks in a courteous and timely manner. Also she is interested in xxxxxxx of the patients with different clinical profiles and participating in basic as well as clinical researches.
I highly recommend xxxxxx for graduate courses.
                                                                                        

 

سلام،
بنظرم متن توصیه نامه علاوه بر اینکه توصیف کلی و جنرال داره، طوری نوشته شده که انگار شما این افتخار رو به استاد دادید که شاگردش باشید !
I am pleased to write a ...

 I have had an opportunity to observe ...

 

 

[Emir]

مرسی از پاسختون
راستش من اینجا شانس خوبی اوردم و 2 تا استادم گفتن که بنویس ما واست امضا میکنیم
اگه بازم من رو در این مورد کمک کنین که چه چیزای بنویسم خیلی ممنون میشم .
من هر دو تاش رو اینجا میزارم که نظر بدین .
چون دست خودم هستش هرچی بخوام میتوم اضافه کنم .
ممنون
اولی:

Letter of Recommendation
 
To Whom It May Concern
This reference letter is provided at the request of Mr. Amir Mohammadzadeh , who has asked me to serve as a reference on his behalf. I have known him for two years, and As his professor, I have had an opportunity to observe his participation and interaction in the class and to evaluate the student’s knowledge in the subject matter.                                                                                                                                                                       His research ability, professional interest, maturity, motivation, self-reliance and academic preparation are exceptional, incredible and practical. I would rate the student’s overall performance as excellent. Based upon the student’s academic performance, I strongly recommend him for the P.hD program at Finance Department. It is worth mentioning that we have practiced a comprehensive paper about investment . Also he has passed these courses with me successfully with  high grade;                                                                                                                                                                       1) Fundamentals of Investment Management     (17 out of 20 )                                                                         2) Analysis of Financial Statements (18.75 out of 20 )                                                                                          3) Investment management and securities evaluation (16.50 out of 20 )
 
Sincerely
دومی:

To Whom It May Concern
 
 
This letter is in support of Mr Amir Mohammadzadeh applying for  Ph.D studies in Finance department. He has had a fundamental training in Finance Department of University of Tehran. He has all the requirements to make him a very successful Ph.D student. I think he is having a very exceptional capacity for analytical thinking and very good ability to express and organize himself clearly. He has been a top student during his years of study in research and  his performance was exceptional. Since these courses such as;  Financial Seminar, Examining specific cases in Financial Management have been passed excellently by him with  top grades of 20 out of 20 and 18 out of 20 . It is worth  mentioning that an article entitled, The Strategic Investment of Corporate Governance in Improving the Stock Profitability,  has been published by us in Jokull Journal in 2013.
 Based on mentioned reasons, I strongly recommend him to continue his Ph.D studies in your department and wish him a successful career in the future.
 
 
Truly yours,

[eliroz]

اولی:

Letter of Recommendation
To Whom It May Concern
This reference letter is provided at the request of Mr. Amir Mohammadzadeh , who has asked me to serve as a reference on his behalf. I have known him for two years, and As his professor, I have had an opportunity to observe his participation and interaction in the class and to evaluate the student’s knowledge in the subject matter.                                                                                                                                                                       His research ability, professional interest, maturity, motivation, self-reliance and academic preparation are exceptional, incredible and practical. I would rate the student’s overall performance as excellent. Based upon the student’s academic performance, I strongly recommend him for the P.hD program at Finance Department. It is worth mentioning that we have practiced a comprehensive paper about investment . Also he has passed these courses with me successfully with  high grade;                                                                                                                                                                       1) Fundamentals of Investment Management     (17 out of 20 )                                                                         2) Analysis of Financial Statements (18.75 out of 20 )                                                                                          3) Investment management and securities evaluation (16.50 out of 20 )
Sincerely
دومی:
To Whom It May Concern
This letter is in support of Mr Amir Mohammadzadeh applying for  Ph.D studies in Finance department. He has had a fundamental training in Finance Department of University of Tehran. He has all the requirements to make him a very successful Ph.D student. I think he is having a very exceptional capacity for analytical thinking and very good ability to express and organize himself clearly. He has been a top student during his years of study in research and  his performance was exceptional. Since these courses such as;  Financial Seminar, Examining specific cases in Financial Management have been passed excellently by him with  top grades of 20 out of 20 and 18 out of 20 . It is worth  mentioning that an article entitled, The Strategic Investment of Corporate Governance in Improving the Stock Profitability,  has been published by us in Jokull Journal in 2013.
 Based on mentioned reasons, I strongly recommend him to continue his Ph.D studies in your department and wish him a successful career in the future.
Truly yours,

سلام دوست عزیز 
اولی به نظرم خوبه ولی دومی تو این قسمتی که اشاره کردید یه مقاله کار کردین با استادتون و چاپ شده، بهتره استاد از کارهای تحقیقی و این روحیه تحقیق و پژوهش خوبی که دارید و با هم همکاری های خوبی داشتید و نتیجه اش شده مقاله ای با عنوان فلان که در سال 2013 در ژورنال فلان هم انتشار یافته.
به نظرم اینجوری روحیه پروهشی شما بیشتر نشون داده میشه تا اینکه بگید باهم کار کردید و یه مقاله چاپ کردید فقط. 
باید استاد یه جورهائی ازتون به خاطر همکاری این مقاله تعریف کنه دیگه
موفق باشی

 

[Emir]

اولی:

Letter of Recommendation
To Whom It May Concern
This reference letter is provided at the request of Mr. Amir Mohammadzadeh , who has asked me to serve as a reference on his behalf. I have known him for two years, and As his professor, I have had an opportunity to observe his participation and interaction in the class and to evaluate the student’s knowledge in the subject matter.                                                                                                                                                                       His research ability, professional interest, maturity, motivation, self-reliance and academic preparation are exceptional, incredible and practical. I would rate the student’s overall performance as excellent. Based upon the student’s academic performance, I strongly recommend him for the P.hD program at Finance Department. It is worth mentioning that we have practiced a comprehensive paper about investment . Also he has passed these courses with me successfully with  high grade;                                                                                                                                                                       1) Fundamentals of Investment Management     (17 out of 20 )                                                                         2) Analysis of Financial Statements (18.75 out of 20 )                                                                                          3) Investment management and securities evaluation (16.50 out of 20 )
Sincerely
دومی:
To Whom It May Concern
This letter is in support of Mr Amir Mohammadzadeh applying for  Ph.D studies in Finance department. He has had a fundamental training in Finance Department of University of Tehran. He has all the requirements to make him a very successful Ph.D student. I think he is having a very exceptional capacity for analytical thinking and very good ability to express and organize himself clearly. He has been a top student during his years of study in research and  his performance was exceptional. Since these courses such as;  Financial Seminar, Examining specific cases in Financial Management have been passed excellently by him with  top grades of 20 out of 20 and 18 out of 20 . It is worth  mentioning that an article entitled, The Strategic Investment of Corporate Governance in Improving the Stock Profitability,  has been published by us in Jokull Journal in 2013.
 Based on mentioned reasons, I strongly recommend him to continue his Ph.D studies in your department and wish him a successful career in the future.
Truly yours,

سلام دوست عزیز 
اولی به نظرم خوبه ولی دومی تو این قسمتی که اشاره کردید یه مقاله کار کردین با استادتون و چاپ شده، بهتره استاد از کارهای تحقیقی و این روحیه تحقیق و پژوهش خوبی که دارید و با هم همکاری های خوبی داشتید و نتیجه اش شده مقاله ای با عنوان فلان که در سال 2013 در ژورنال فلان هم انتشار یافته.
به نظرم اینجوری روحیه پروهشی شما بیشتر نشون داده میشه تا اینکه بگید باهم کار کردید و یه مقاله چاپ کردید فقط. 
باید استاد یه جورهائی ازتون به خاطر همکاری این مقاله تعریف کنه دیگه
موفق باشی

 

 

مرسی دوست من
پس به نظر شما اولی خوبه و نیاز به تغییر نیست .
و اما در مورد دومی که میگید چن جمله اضافه کنم , شما میتونین اون جمله ها رو بنویسین و من اضافه کنم
؟
در ضمن با استاد اولی هم یه مقاله انگلیسی کار کردم که در متن ذکر شده نظرت در مورد اون چیه ؟

با تشکر

[ella]

از عبارت to whom it may concern زمانی استفاده می کنیم که دریافت کننده نامه را نشناسیم در غیر اینصورت اگر اسم دریافت کننده را بدونیم استفاده از این عبارت نادرسته.در مورد انتهای نامه و استفاده از Yours sincerely و Yours faithfully چنان که در ابتدای نامه اسم دریافت کننده را ذکر کرده باشین باید از ,Yours sincerely استفاده کنید مثلاDear Miss Emma watson اما  وقتی اسم دریافت کننده نامه را در ابتدای  نامه ذکر نکرده باشین یا فقط میدونید که خانم هستن یا اقا در ابتدای نامه می نویسید Dear Sir or Madam و در انتها از عبارت ,Yours faithfully  استفاده می کنید  در موارد استفاده از to whom  it may concern  هم باید از Yours faithfully استفاده کرد حتما باید حرف اول حرف بزرگ و یک کاما هم در انتهاش قرار بگیره ,Yours faithfully