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In order to become financially responsible adults children should learn to manage their own money at a young age.
agree/disagree
We live in a world in which people allocate most of their time for working in order to afford family expenses. Some
people may hold the opinion that they should pay attention to all wishes of children, therefore they buy for them diverse toys and when they grow up their demands grow as their ages, and parents may face a lot rigors. Other people are of the view that they should control the desire of children because they can be responsible parents in future. As far as I am concerned with learning the concept of saving money, not only do children have the ability to be more phlegmatic, but also they can be more vigilant in
predicaments.
The first aspect which should be mentioned is that children can be more tranquil when they become mature. They can manage their problems in their personal life when they face a dilemma.to shed some lights on the point consider a situation in which a person is graduated from university and he goes a lot of job interviews but, he cannot find his niche. handling the expenses in an unemployment status is an important factor , and some pieces of advice from parents which are stuck in children’s mind guide them to deal with difficult situation, moreover they can have better marriage in their personal life because they have learned how to manage the expenses in a house in an efficient method.
Another point which deserves some words here is that they have the ability perceive their parents’ rigors when they are in hazardous situations. For illustration, parents may pass away during a teenager life, and due to this difficulty, they have to save their money and also sometimes they may get a part-time job in order to afford expenses if the children do not understand the gist of saving money, they will get perplexed, and they do not have strong ideas to withstand. In addition, family occasionally may encounter some financial problems or some pay checks and, parents expect sympathy from children to handle the unpleasant situation. Children enable either decline their desires or spend less money in comparison with old days
In the final analysis, children should enable to manage their expenses in order to be a peaceful person and be more
careful about the family’s problems.it high time we stopped spoiling children.it is worthwhile to have independent children for being successful parents in future.
agree/disagree
We live in a world in which people allocate most of their time for working in order to afford family expenses. Some
people may hold the opinion that they should pay attention to all wishes of children, therefore they buy for them diverse toys and when they grow up their demands grow as their ages, and parents may face a lot rigors. Other people are of the view that they should control the desire of children because they can be responsible parents in future. As far as I am concerned with learning the concept of saving money, not only do children have the ability to be more phlegmatic, but also they can be more vigilant in
predicaments.
The first aspect which should be mentioned is that children can be more tranquil when they become mature. They can manage their problems in their personal life when they face a dilemma.to shed some lights on the point consider a situation in which a person is graduated from university and he goes a lot of job interviews but, he cannot find his niche. handling the expenses in an unemployment status is an important factor , and some pieces of advice from parents which are stuck in children’s mind guide them to deal with difficult situation, moreover they can have better marriage in their personal life because they have learned how to manage the expenses in a house in an efficient method.
Another point which deserves some words here is that they have the ability perceive their parents’ rigors when they are in hazardous situations. For illustration, parents may pass away during a teenager life, and due to this difficulty, they have to save their money and also sometimes they may get a part-time job in order to afford expenses if the children do not understand the gist of saving money, they will get perplexed, and they do not have strong ideas to withstand. In addition, family occasionally may encounter some financial problems or some pay checks and, parents expect sympathy from children to handle the unpleasant situation. Children enable either decline their desires or spend less money in comparison with old days
In the final analysis, children should enable to manage their expenses in order to be a peaceful person and be more
careful about the family’s problems.it high time we stopped spoiling children.it is worthwhile to have independent children for being successful parents in future.
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